Chavez, Jonathan
War
I was 10 years old
When my 12 year old brother told me and my family
He wanted to go to war
And my mom said “no way”
I felt afraid to lose him
It would hurt us a lot
It wouldn’t be the same without him
It would feel like falling off a big mountain
Every day would look dark
It would be like there was no tomorrow
Like a dark hole no one wants to go in.
Day after day I prayed to god
To help change my brother’s mind about going to war
It worked because he did
He asked himself
why do I want to go to war
It’s only going to be a waste of my time.
Killing people is not going to change anything
It’s just going to lead to a bigger problem
People don’t know killing someone is against God’s will.
War is hell always full of violence
And never in peace
When we heard that…
My family and I
Were so happy because my brother didn’t
Want to go to war anymore
We never want to be the people
To get told, “Your brother died last night in war.”
I’m glad that my brother isn’t going to war
Because when I do terrible things my brother
Is always there to give me some advice
When I need help in my homework
He helps me understand it better
We do a lot of fun things together
Every Saturday we go to the park
To play football and other fun sports
Without him life would end for me
Because I wouldn’t have him to talk with
When I feel sad, lonely, terrific, or hopeless
I want to end war because
I want my brother to be in my life

